Dear Diary,
I'm
Ralph, but I think you already know that since this is my journal. Right now, I
am on an island with the other boys from the boarding school because our plane
split in two and CRASHED! I miss my family, and my bed, and my food, and my
home. I crash landed with this fat kid I know call Piggy and he told me
that he has "ass-mar" but I don't know what that is
though. He talks a lot for someone who really misses their family
back home. Since we've been walking around FOREVER I found this
pool-thingy and its really warm and deep and I can swim in it because my
Daddy taught me.
Piggy and I found a conch shell buried in the sand by the water on the beach
and Piggy told me that its worth a lot of money back home. He told me to blow
into it and it made a loud kind of trumpet/farting sound. It gathered all of
the boys on the island from the crash to a meeting so we can get an idea of how many survivors
there are. A group of boys come out of the woods dressed in robs and dirt and
their leader, Jack, called themselves "the choir boys". We all
decided to elect a leader of all of us and they elected your truly; ME! Since
Jack was mad that he wasn’t elected leader, I decided to make him and his choir
boys the hunters and kill animals for food. Jack chooses one of his boys,
Simon, to be the explorer of the island.
Exploring the island was great, the
boys assigned to be the explorers reached the end of the jungle where high
sharp rocks point toward steep mountains. I thought that we had found our own
new land of the island that we have never seen before. While we were looking
around, there was a pig that was trapped in some vines and since Jack was the
leader of the hunters, he was going to kill it, but he didn't. The pig managed
to get away but Jack promised not to hesitate next time. Hope he keeps his
promise.
Signed,
Ralph
Very nice job! I like how descriptive and detailed you were. Nice job girl!!
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB!! You have an excellent entry here. You reminded me about an important event that went on in the book which was how the pig managed to get away from Jack.
ReplyDeleteBreathtaking, you portrayed Ralph AMAZINGLY. You provided information on the major events. You truly sounded like him, when you mentioned how he hopes Jack keeps his promise it reminds me of how much hope he has for other. Truly great
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